All Comments on 'Deep Undercover'

I couldn't sleep so i looked for something to read. Definitely a good Dom/sub mix. After working up a nice orgasm (thanks to this) I think I will sleep nicely now. I can't wait for the continuation.

and hot beginning. I'll definitely be looking for the next chapter

Who is Madison an agent for? The Girl Scouts? A known operative for an terrorist organization manages to kidnap a high level agent in her own territory by infiltrating a restaurant she normally uses for meets with informants? Her team doesn't vet the clientele on an important night? She isn't under surveillance? There's no counter-action protocol in place? Ian Fleming wouldn't write something with this many plot holes. 2 stars.

too hot ; )

Please write more chapters

Lovely. I can't wait to read more.

Yes there is a plot hole as a previous poster has pointed out but the overall energy and tone of the story is fantastic. After all this story is not the "Patriot Games" it's bdsm. You need to go back and fix a couple of editing mistakes but that no big deal. Personally I am waiting for the next chapter.

This has the makings of something special and it hasn't front-loaded all the action, which makes it even better. My preference would be for the heroine to spend less time drugged into unconsciousness and more time struggling in sexy restraint, but I'm still loving it.

Woukd prefer it if the characters weren't so predictable and the story line too. She couldn't help but get wet...

Oh my god. This story is so good, not just the story, but the way u wrote it is amazing. It's like reading a movie. I hope u continue on with this, because it is one of the best stories I have read here. Keep up the amazing work!

This story pulled right in - great work and I can't wait to continue reading!!

Your story gripped me right from the beginning! Great start! Thank you :)

MastersWench

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I'm not sure if all of you are as into the story as I am, but I got so excited and had to come back on here and post that the full book is for sale on Amazon!!!! FINALLY I can finish it!!!

http://www.amazon.com/Deep-Undercover-Joues-Rouges-ebook/dp/B00X1MOKUU/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1446574176&sr=1-1&keywords=deep+undercover+joues+rouges

Well, that was bloody hot. An army of butterflies dancing in my stomach. Phew !

Unfortunately, this story goes on for a long while, but is unfinished.