All Comments on 'Boss Lady'

Very good story, and I'm sure this is a common fantasy. Noticed at least one example of lack of tense agreement, and a couple of single/multiple problems which just show the need for an editor. Otherwise, I really enjoyed it.

Great storie,realistic in a fantasy way.

Story is great...i hope that it will continue:)

The begining started off well however in my opinion it drizziled out at the end

That's a hell of the story, not too short and not too long. A little seductive description would be perfect.

Very good story. The ending seemed a little rushed. I would expect the girls in the office to start treating Todd very specially. You always value someone in the office that keeps the boss in a good mood.

You write very well. Stories are pretty good and the plots are interesting. However you really should get some tutoring in vocabulary and grammar. your writing would then be excellent. Please.

I thought it was just outstanding. I found no fault with it at all. Great little tale' keep it up!

Fast paced and hot as all get out. Love it.

a pleasure to read.

and then he got rewarded by sticking it in her well and truly....one in the eye for the prick who bad mouthed her....wont he be pissed

A very good story. I had read it before and enjoyed it so much I lost it and I just found it tonight. 5 starts plus and in my favorites. I do think that it could have lasted longer say one or two chapters to see what happened between the two of them instead of leaving it at she never slept alone again. I am sure that there is sequil material there. If you have wriien one what is the name.

Ron. Texas

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Immensely enjoyable -- I sure loved reading it

It is in my favorites. I am waiting on the sequil.

Ron

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Can part two be done

In my favorites. Please write a follow up story about them. 5. Stars plus

We need a part 2

NEED THAT PART 2, PLEASE...! BETTY jo xoxo

Love the story, soooo funny. And exciting.

Like the ending too.

High five from Germany.

yes , it does need apart 2.

I like the story but there is something missing. Maybe part 2! AAA+++

Nice story but to me it seemed to end a little to quickly, would love to have read some more.............

11/10!!!!!

Part 2 Please