All Comments on 'Our First Encounter'

This was quite a comeback afterFive stars so long away from writing; it must be true what they say about never forgetting how to ride a bicycle!

Welcome back, thank you for a fine story, and please keep writing now you have rediscovered your talent. I look forward to reading much more from you, soon.

Five stars, and again, well done!

I could feel the tension and the confliction that Sue was going through. The suspense was a killer. Only suggestion: If you're going to write in present tense, do so consistently. Other than that, a thrilling account, and well done! Five stars for sure!

I really could feel the woman's fears building. There are a couple of editing mistakes that are easily fixed. Overall a great story!