All Comments on 'Christina'

amazing!!!

brilliant, well done sir!

I did like the story, I just felt that you started off way too quick. You should try to make a bigger story, where you take a character and gradually evolves this character all through the story. But then again, its just my opinion.

I very nearly came while reading Ur story about X-tina! Real nice details. U write quite well. I only wish that it were more lengthy. Right when I was reaching a Fever Pitch, it was over! <sigh> Keep writing. More X-tina stuff 2, please. That lil whore is SO hot, OMG! Thanks 4 the story.