All Comments on 'Garden Blues'

by demure101

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
*****

Five.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 9 years ago
micro to the macro

This lush wetness is not unlike a far-off hillside shantytown;

scale may be a little skewed...

The sun is far too seldom out to make an impact on the crop; all it wants

is nothing but a little bit more warmth.

Do you want a hug?

5ed

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 9 years ago
Really nice Demure

Greens are green and quality cannot be judged from a distance - You might be looking at my lawn. Wonderful descriptions, I liked this one a lot.

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