by Licorne
I felt so very bad for the girl-shows how drinking (or drugs) can inhibit your ablity to control situations. Well writen, good plot, it broke my heart.
I've now read all your stories.
This one was heart breaking and seemed very real, especially the how something gets out of control.
I've written a story as agedmac whose early part, about how the girl decided to give up her virginity to her boyfriend didn't work out well, it's called, "Is that all there is?" Hope you'll read and comment
Mac
I will admit I didn't finish the story. I got to this line:
"(and not counting diapering which no one remembers anyway)"
And it took me right out of the story. I mean, totally derailed. Who wants to think about diapering in the middle of sex? I have no idea how it ended, and it's a pity, because it was shaping up to be good, but I can't get beyond the diaper thing.
I really enjoyed the dark twist to this story... I felt for the main character.
Virginity is for those who arent ready to walk on their own. Once you step into adults paths of drinking ,drugs, or sex then you reap what you sow. Any female that allows themself to be around a situation such as this willfully deserves to have a cock pushed way deep into their pussy.Even if its a virgin. In this story several things wrong. Alcohol involved, the girls new better. She couldnt even tell the guy or her friend she was a virgin? Yeah, bust that hole wide the fuck open. Slam it deep and hard. Split that cherry like a melon. I dont feel bad for her at all. She lucky he didnt rip that virgin asshole open and show her what a fucking it can take too.
Oh, your poor character! But really nicely written.