All Comments on 'The Wallflower Ch. 05'

That ending was like bam!!! Really great chapter!! Loved it. I want more.

Wow!...... What a way to leave us hanging..... *purrs* i wouldn't mind being in Lily's place in that moment. i'm surprised that she didn't realize the burning gaze he was giving her wasn't his normal steel greys but more intense embers. Love it!!!! Keep up the great writing. Looking forward to the next chapter and seeing just what the Spirit has planned for her.

I'm hooked!! This was a great chaper! I love the way you write with so much detail. You are very talented and I'm excited to read the next chapters. I hope you'll submit one soon!

I am seriously in love with your writing! I'm not eexaggerating when I say you are one of the best authors here! I look every week to see if a new chapter is out. You are truly amazing keep up the amazing glorious work! Can't wait to see more! :D

How could you. ;) By 'eck, you like torturing us, finishing it where you did. Brilliant chapter, brilliant story. MORE MORE MORE PLEASE! I need to know what happens next, LIKE NOW WOULD BE GOOD!!!!, so please, please, please hurry with chapter 6. :)

Sooo good. And to leave us hanging like that. Your writing is excellent (as usual), story and characters are excellent (as usual) and the pace stays steady. I'm waiting with anticipation for the next chapter.

How dare you leave me hanging like this, please keep writing Ill die if you don't this story is just too amazing

nicholas definitely knows more than he's letting on and it's making me angry that i don't know yet! the plot for this story is very interesting and i'm sure there's a lot to uncover about the spirit and his association with nicholas. poor lily. i hope her fragile heart can handle what's to come her way. can't help but mention that brandon is a dick and can go fuck himself.

These are amazing, you need to upload more often. I find myself coming onto this website PURELY to find out if you have uploaded the next chapter. I LOVE THESE!

A very interesting story, would love to read more of it!

Nicholas sure doesn't respect his mother. He doesn't respect himself sometimes. I'm trying to understand why he continues to have sex with his crazy co-worker. With her jealous and possessive behavior you would think he would leave her alone. But Nicholas has some issues himself so I understand why he keeps screwing her.

I can't wait for the next chapter to be written! Pleeeaase hurry! ❤ ❤ ❤

This story is weird to say the least. But I'm hooked!! Lol!! I came across this by accident because I never look in the erotic horror category. I'm glad I let curiosity and desperation to read a new story lead me to it. This is really good and well written with minimal errors. I can't wait for Lily to grow a spine and stand up for her self. I'm impatiently waiting for more chapters.

I absolutely love the story I was just looking around and I check everyday to see if you have more.

CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!! :) :D loved the story btw

NEED MORE.

Can't get enough of this, I neeeeed more !

I can NOT wait anymore!! please write chapter 6, 7, 8 and all the chapters! I check every day for it! It is such a good series!

Don't like the writing style or the story that much. Sorry

I need another chapter for my fix!!

This is actually a great story, please wrote more I would love to see how things end up?

First off, you're a total babe. This story is fuck awesome and I would absolutely love it if you could post another chapter. I know life happens and I'm not pressuring you, I just wanted you to know that I am a loyal fan that awaits your greatness to continue.*~*

Please

I've been checking every day for a new chapter, I need it now

Meeeoooww! Getting some ghost action

Love this story what I don't like is waitin do long for you to finish

Can't wait for more please post a new chapter soon

What do they look like? As in, their features and clothing style, etc.