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by grecian13

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good basic story line, but poorly delivered.

The basic story line is good. Keep on writing, please. But the poor grammar and the run-on sentences are all so distracting. It would do you good to take a basic English Comp. course, or find someone who does editing.

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