All Comments on 'Kim & Kate Ch. 02'

OK, nothing really happened here, but I a giving you benefit of doubt that you are building up to something. The domination by the two needs to start fairly soon though, or you'll lose your audience. Jedd

This is an amazing story. Sleep going.

You mention a parallel story from the wife's pov. It would be good to do before this goes to far (pun intended). I know this is in Fetish, but it is difficult to suspend the disbelief at the entire situation. This is especially so as you have started the boulder rolling down hill.

Keep writing

This is my life story.I am the Kate in my life...

MORE MORE MORE

You gotta finish. This is awesome. My wife is a teacher, with lots of hot students.

Great story, love your writing style.

want much more

Can,t wait for the schoolgirl to get her wish!

Really enjoying this sexyhot story and very much looking forward to more....!

Please please please write another chapter?

one can only guess that the volume of Negative Feedback has scared the Author away from continuing the story .

As Usual the Haters&Flamers .. seem to have Silenced an imaginative & engaging writer.

is a shame ...

if 10 trolls dislike something , they all attack the source with vitriol.

if 100 people Like Something , the Author is Lucky if they get one encouraging response.

xxxhugsxxx

5 STARS for imagination & for daring to write about these themes.

Hello everybody and thank you so much for the feedback and support I have received on my writing. I wanted to leave a comment here to let you know that I WILL finish these stories. I have just been extremely busy and unable to work on them recently but I promise to give you guys the best ending I can imagine. Thanks again!

This is one of the best stories I have ever red. Please give us a new chapter :)

its an amazing story want to read more, the best is to come !!

There needs to be a way for Kate to get revenge. This story made me too sad for her.

Title says it all

Normally I don't read them, I just write...this is something else. I saw it because you and I are on someone's "story list"