All Comments on 'Shrunken Situation Pt. 01'

by 003_hunter

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003_hunter003_hunterover 9 years agoAuthor

It's not the end I'm afraid! Haha, sorry you didn't like it. Stuff like this isn't for everyone.

It takes him a few seconds to realise as he's in a sleepy state. You know that feeling you get sometimes when you wake up and you forget where you are for a moment? He's not really taking in what he sees, but then after a few seconds it clicks and that's when he wakes up.

Anyway, the focus of this story isn't on realism as you've noticed. It's just a bit of fun. If it's not to your taste that's fine, as I'm sure there are thousands of more realistic and more serious stories for you to read! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I liked it

Good story, looking forward to reading more!

003_hunter003_hunterover 9 years agoAuthor

Glad you enjoyed it! Part 2 should be up in a few days

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great story, hope you will continue with this. Will be on the look out for part two, until then good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MORE

GREAT STORY MAKE SOME MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
really good please continue with part 3

really good please continue with part 3, if so when will part 3 be online??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more

More pls

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Why didn't you leave the fart out?! Gross! Talk about ruining a mood!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Me a gustado

Me ha encantado toda la historia , el aplastamiento el pedo todo es muy buena

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