All Comments on 'Josh's Naked Walk'

about the negative comments. As a quick, silly read this was fine :)

I have a different opinion that most other. As a fantasy story it was fine and I say continue writing; do not get to down hearted about the negative comments. Good luck.

Don't listen to the negative comments. I want to read more.

Will you continue? I wanna know will he do something with a guy?

Do to the large amount of "don't continue" style comments, I don't believe I will continue.

But thank you everyone for both your negative and positive feedback.

.....to definitely read more of this lively tale. Please don't leave us hanging here. Pun Intended!

Your writing is definitely 'edgy', but it's also creative, interesting and well written. So many literotica members write about the same old things...over and over again. I think you should ignore all the 'nay sayers' and write about whatever you want. After all...that's what they're doing...if they've got the guts to publish their own creations. Your subject isn't going to be widely popular and won't 'score' well, but you'll have a loyal niche following that will anxiously await each new installment. Don't let the narrow minded 'bullies' stop you from writing about what inspires you. :o)

I couldn't agree with you more! :) Thank you very, very much for your upbeat and positive comment! To me, 20+ negative comments mean nothing if just one person writes one positive comment. So again, thank you very much for the compliments, and even if its just for you, I will definitely be writing more. :)

Hi,

Thanks for a deliciously kinky story - I think I'd love to meet with young Josh - imagine, if he got that into my bald married snatch, he'd come out of my mouth !!!!

Please do a second chapter, hopefully where he doesn't just show off his beautiful long thick cock, but fucks a few married mum's like myself, hopefully putting at least one baby in my tight, flat married belly.

Sarah Leather, London England (married leather wearing fit, tight & toned blonde mum, in my early thirties)

Wow! Haha thank you for your very hot feed bad, Mrs. Leathersuitgirl! Sadly, I don't think I'll be writing another one of these, but feel free to check out my other story called Simons Adventures in Exhibitionism. It's very similar to this one and I'll be coming out with a part two for it hopefully soon!

Thank you again! :)

Please please please make a part 2 to this. I've read this multiple times and through Josh I have vicariously lived out my own fantasies.

looking for the second part