All Comments on 'Last Kiss'

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Ashesh9 over 9 years ago

Last kiss on the

Back of an apology note , Playcatch ?

todski28 over 9 years ago

welcome to the poetry forum and new poems :) I gave this piece a five

my mind is wandering in strange directions, the mention of exits, and arrows and bottoms, a kiss on the back, with the duality of it, it could as easily be a literal kiss on someones back or conversely a kiss on the back of the note, it's as if you are intersecting a bad erotic anal experience with a break up,