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by erectus123
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todski28over 9 years agolong time no see
smooth, Erectus, very smooth,
it flows like syrup
interesting rhyme structure. good to see you "up" and about
Ashesh9over 9 years agoHey Erectus , welcome baaaack , Bro !!!
Sorry i missed your poem until dear Tod alerted me : please stick around for some time now before you disappear again . Am sure He Who must Not be Named is gonna be highly disturbed @ your reappearance !?
Amongst other news our Bro & mutual friend Harry Hill is gettin' married to a fellow Poet from this Forum itself !
Warm regards,
Ash
HarryHillover 9 years agoWell hell, E good to see you post
and I would have missed this if not for trying to track down a poem butters was talking to me about... very nicely done except for these lines...
To lay my head
Upon your lap
To lick and lap
Your inner sap
take a dip in the Caribbean?
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Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...
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