All Comments on 'Mrs. Cheng Pays the Debt Ch. 12'

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Nixnax9Nixnax9over 9 years ago
Well done. I keep learning more from the characters.

I liked how this chapter talked somewhat more about Jacob as the previous chapters had leaned towards Bobby a bit more. I can't believe its almost over. Thank you for letting us know that the final chapter will be about Anne as a single woman in her new life. I look forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story.

Beautiful as always but please let them impregnate her before she leaves. It would be great for her to start her new life with a child from one of the boys. That way I'm sure they'd come visit often.

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