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todski28over 9 years agoperfect sentiments
capped with a killer final line, loved the use of shopping list, and writing a list poem clever. 5ed
Trixareforkidsover 9 years agoThank you OldBear
I do so love your perspective, and agree completely with Todski, that last line is a killer wrap up.
Oldbear63over 9 years agoAuthorThanks Todski
This is a rip off of Trixie's Wheels poem - she did it first and a lot more cleverly...
todski28over 9 years agoI knew that
they were too similar thematically, though you think trix did it better blah, blah
it is a great contrast of masculine and feminine writing.
Ashesh9over 9 years agoAnd just add Amen to your
Shoppin' List Oldbear : jus' hope every man is so lucky ! 5-ed.
HoneyAdoredover 9 years agoA healthy shopping list
That is a good list of staples
Beautifully written
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
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