All Comments on 'Julie Becomes John's Pet Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Glad you are writing again

Glad to see you back liked following your adventure in life

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
FINALLY!!!!!

I am sosososo glad you finally updated this!!! Ilove all of your stories! I thought you may have abandoned them!! I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say we missed you!!!

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgover 9 years ago
What Is This And Why Is It In...

...BDSM? I've gone back through all 15 chapters, just to see if somehow I managed to miss some small piece that would give a hint as to WHY this story was posted in this section. I have to ask if the author understands the various terminology involved with an S&M relationship, specifically what 'Pet' means, or to 'become' a 'Pet' under S&M. It does not seem possible that this understanding exists, and it has been very frustrating to read through this. Even on an unspoken level, Julie is a wife, but not with the dominant male. She starts some basic dominant female relationship with her husband, and that was the best connection made with anything that could be labeled a 'Pet' and yet its not ever consummated in any way, in fact no relationship of this type is even begun, let alone attempted to mature into something as sophisticated as a Pet under S&M. What's described is something else entirely and what it is... I would rather not say. But it has absolutely NOTHING to do with 'becoming a Pet', and should be removed from this genre entirely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

This story is many things, but I agree with Jocelyn that BDSM is the least of things it is. Probably a better fit to all be in Loving Wives, but it would be shredded in that piranha tank.

It is a rather dark and sad tale.

Johns Pet JulieJohns Pet Julieover 9 years agoAuthor
Looking for an editor for future chapters!

If anyone is interested please contact me, JohnsPetJulie at g mail.

Of course this is the only thing I use that account for.

Thanks, looking forward to hearing from you if you'e interested!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Your writing is fine

You don't need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Literotica’s Superstar Returns!

Such a great story, so much more than just fucking and sucking. Julie makes me laugh, cry, and cum.

Don't ever leave us again! :) :) :) :) :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot

Love your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
NON EROTIC SMUT!

THESE STORIES SHOULD ALL GET NEGATIVE STARS.

NOTHING BUT FILTHY PERVERSION TO SEE HERE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent story & well written

Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
xcellent series

keep writing

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