All Comments on 'Death Bed'

Whiny, irritating, annoying.

I saw the low rating, scrolled through to see how many pages, saw multiple lines of numbers, completely lost any interest in reading.

I actually liked your story. But Kendra's character was beyond my understanding. Since this is your first story, you did well. You're a fine writer, just need to improve yourself. Best luck! (y)

I really liked it! Kendra had OCD, I'm guessing. Her obsession with numbers was illustrated very nicely.

Did you mean to put the prologue at the end?

Dark ending...I liked it :)

Intense, real.

Good.

Raw.

Crap ending - seriously, WTF?

Why did she kill herself?

This is bad and you should feel bad.

You have to write a sequel. You didn't conclude if she caught the bullet or not. Great story though. At first I was a bit dismayed with the ended but I really like it now. Good job!

Kendra was modeled after a person that I live with that suffers from Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. I didn't feel the need to go into her disorder in the story because it's not what it is about; I just simply told the story from her perspective.

yeah... I agree, u shud write a sequel i really liked the story. And would love to see what happen next! Nicely written story. Thank you.

It's a really good story with a ending that is tough to take.

Well written, and I love the OCD element. You did a great job with the pacing and character development, so good job there. The sex was hot, the conflict interesting... But really, the ending pretty much ruined it for me.

I don't require HEA for a good story, but this just seemed designed for its shock value... If so, congratulations, it worked - I'm shocked - and sad.

Even though the ending took me a little by surprise and made me a little sad. That's what good writing is. Evoking feelings from readers. You are an amazing writer. I'm glad this story is realistic I think that's why it's so great too. Women do like to pretend everything is ok and avoid confrontation keep in and create this sexual tension that thickens air, I swear. But it makes it all so much more exciting, although very frustrating. As I said before I liked the ending in that it wasn't just all rainbows and pink colored font. But still I have grown up in the Hollywood happily ever after world and would love to see that happen here but not without lots of tension and struggle and fighting to keep the person you love. Thanks

Ok the ending caught me a lot by surprise cuz it went from so sweet to BAM! gun in mouth? Over all it was a well written and amazing story.

this was a very good story, but the ending was not to be believed I want to know what happened after she put the gun in her mouth and pulled the trigger