by fun_tracy
Holy fuck, do not use the expression "holy fuck" if you want to be taken seriously.
NOT, someone has daddy problems. LOL
A very good read sensual passionate, and full of lust! Ignore that jackass anonymous only a prick with a very small one would read a story then give a stupid opinion no one asked for! A very brave coward behind a computer screen,...keep writing stories beautiful goddess!!!
You have an enthusiasm for this topic that shines through in your writing. I would like to see you use it in a fictional setting so the stories had more of a plot. 4*