All Comments on 'Saturday Just Keeps Going'

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Cindy1001Cindy1001over 9 years ago
Kinky mind

What a joy!

LesbianChickLitLesbianChickLitover 9 years ago
Fucking hot!

Not all my kinks, but I'm very much digging the d/s relationship developing. Whomever you belong to, she's spoiled.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hi Jill, __ Wow! Well Done! _ Keep Writing!

Your story "Saturday Just Keeps Going" is really a lot better. Your description of pee play is right on!

Jill, I find hard to believe that this is only your second story!?!

Thank you,

Gay Paige.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Your writing is exquisite, just about perfectly in line with my fantasies, but I am a guy. Your build up is great and i would love to do what your story portrays. You have a gift, you should get back to it!

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