All Comments on 'You'

this story has the most important thing any story should have. tenderness. and the fact that they didnt fuck shows that their relation is not about the sex but is about them enjoying each others presence just being together. this was one of the best stories i have ever read. thank you.

Is English not your native language?

This descriptive method of story telling is not only all too common on Literotica but also a terrible way to engage a reader's interest.

It is a catalogue of what "I did next" presumably told to the recipient of such deeds, who must be awfully stupid not to know they have been done!