All Comments on 'Broken Vows Ch. 2'

by SteamyChik

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Nicola_Italia1Nicola_Italia1almost 20 years ago
Hot, Hot, HOT!!!!

This story is well paced and amazing in its details.

I am always creamy after reading her stories.

Thank you - keep up the good work.

TXGURLTXGURLabout 19 years ago
Mmmm Mmmm Good!

For some reason, stories about sex within a convent turn me on so much! Talk about forbidden pleasure!

I come back to this story all the time!

BADSAM689BADSAM689about 16 years ago
Another Great Story!

The sequal is just as good as the first story. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Again, thanks

RedtoffeeRedtoffeeabout 13 years ago
Absolutely magnificent

depravity. Can't wait to see what dark road you will lead us next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A+ from me.

You write beautifully. Vorboten desires, explored succinctly yet completely, sensually, realistically, and with emotional care and intelligence... I find the net effect both deeply erotic and emotive... moving even; so an "A+" from me, little girl ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I loved this entire chapter. But especially this line: "Father Kirk was crazy with lust and finally allowed himself to act on it. Shedding only his outer robe, he pulled the inner robe aside exposing his raging member. The head was flaming red, a big mushroom shape. The shaft was thick and heavily veined terminating in heavy, cum-filled balls. It jumped and jerked with a life of its own." I love your writing!

WishFullWishFullover 10 years ago
BRAVO!

This and chapter 1 -- excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent read!!!

I totally enjoyed this. well written, and it just flows.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great series!

When do we get MORE?

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 5 years ago
wish there to be more

please continue, loving this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

good virgin cunt is so tasty

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