This story is well paced and amazing in its details.
I am always creamy after reading her stories.
Thank you - keep up the good work.
For some reason, stories about sex within a convent turn me on so much! Talk about forbidden pleasure!
I come back to this story all the time!
The sequal is just as good as the first story. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Again, thanks
depravity. Can't wait to see what dark road you will lead us next.
You write beautifully. Vorboten desires, explored succinctly yet completely, sensually, realistically, and with emotional care and intelligence... I find the net effect both deeply erotic and emotive... moving even; so an "A+" from me, little girl ;-)
I loved this entire chapter. But especially this line: "Father Kirk was crazy with lust and finally allowed himself to act on it. Shedding only his outer robe, he pulled the inner robe aside exposing his raging member. The head was flaming red, a big mushroom shape. The shaft was thick and heavily veined terminating in heavy, cum-filled balls. It jumped and jerked with a life of its own." I love your writing!
This and chapter 1 -- excellent.
I totally enjoyed this. well written, and it just flows.
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