All Comments on 'The Fox and the Wolf Ch. 02'

Wondering just who is getting tamed...LOL! Very well done!!!

Just keep them comming!

This is bad for so many reasons. Obviously written by a loser who's only sex education has been s***t porn sites. It stinks of by-and-for-ignorant-teenage-boy. The fantasy idiot character is the poorest and shallowest element, the writer obviously can't understand a woman even a young sexy woman, is a human being (or how to write about those). Will he be writing about the result of rough anal sex? The nappies, the follow through farts, the risk of growths, tumours and haemorrhoids. Nope... none of it's been in his sex education. In the attempt to come off sophisticated he comes off like a pretentious little douche - a woman's ass is not a fleshlight - you thick creamy wadbrain.

Look at how mad a mere work of fiction made you, and reflect on how weak you are

I absolutely love this, please please write more asap

Don't just portray the female as a lusty slut, I mean, show some respect! What exactly is the guy doing here but boasting about his control and then losing his "control." The girl is shown as a slave to his wills, without power of her own. To empower women, your writing sucks!! Booooo.

Loved, loved, loved it! I could read an entire book on them!

This is a great story! Are you going yo make chapter 3?

I think this story does have some realistic mistakes in, like thinking that you could use someone’s virgin body so roughly. But at the same time this is a fantasy book and therefore doesn’t need to be realistic. Also, although the whole point is that she is degraded by Alex, there’s still aspects such as when she can play chess, how she’s getting good grades in her classes ect that show that she isn’t just a slut. I think that it’s an important balance that you’ve managed to include. Please please please do chapter 3 x