All Comments on 'Winning An Argument'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
my frist time with mom

good story close to my time with mom

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
meow

WOuld be good if it was longer. BUT yea YOU SURE SHOWED HER!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Bitch!.....Deserved It!

Cold!....Maybe!....What if, her saying that it's been five yrs, meant nothing to you and you proceeded to plow into her mercilessly, leaving her loin and insides raw. What if she felt raped, yet enjoyed it and came back for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good but to fast

take more time, dont rush the ending.

smsterlingsmsterlingabout 18 years ago
Wonderfully twisted

That was a wonderfully twisted story and I loved it. At a certain point, the story became disquietingly realistic, which is why I enjoyed it so much in the first place. Please keep writing. I think you've got some talent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good!

you have to eat her pussy and ass hole !

a_man_7604@yahoo.fr for women

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Scored ! I always had a BIG ITCH for my mom!

In 1952 dad left and mom remarried in 1954. Mom always took a bath in the evening and walked naked from the bathroom to her bedroom. She was 32 and her bare ass looked fine, as she walked down the hall. By the time I was 15, I'd had hundreds of hard-ons, just watching her walk naked. I never got to BONE HER, but I always dreamed about it. I wacked off many times, just thinking about it! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Too short

JUst as it was getting interesting, the story ended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I wander ?

Great story. I just wander how many men are lucky enough to have this really happen to them. I come from a large family but I never had such good fortune. Keep on Keeping on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hammer time

I agree, it was to abrupt an ending. It needed more action between them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
LUSTFUL TIME

YA...GOOD STORY....

WHEN I WAS 15..I FUCKED MY MOM.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

" Then I felt a hand slide across my leg to my crotch. the hand wasn't mine. "

No shit, Sherlock ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
felt it like i wanted too

great short story. some of these three and four page booooks could take a lesson and get to the climax sooner. porn movies

do it. and the shorter stories are great the more stories you can read at a sitting the better your mind can wander in the lust and sexual healing. xoxoxox its so hot i want you

L.A. WickerL.A. Wickeralmost 13 years ago
Good story

Very good and hot. It would have been better to stretch it out some more, but it was fine!

L.A.Wicker

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 12 years ago
I Agree

I liked it. It had an original premise with the missing cash. The way you moved the story from her making it up to him to him punishing her was great. However, like others, I would have liked to have seen more.

Perhaps he could have gone ahead and blown a load down her throat. Then as she was recovering from that, he could have thrown her down on the bed and fucked her as he did.

He then could have topped off a huge orgasm on her part by fucking her in the ass and bringing her to new heights.

Finally, after they made out for a bit, she could have said the final line.

Thanks and keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Great story man!! Good, short, hot, and got to the poing we all want to read, the action of son fucking mom!!! Great stuff!!

peebudypeebudyover 11 years ago

good story but ended too quickly

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlover 11 years ago
Gorgeous

Fucking deliciously gorgeous - thankyou for a beautiful story - it needs more chapters

Sarah, London England

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 9 years ago

A quick but hot story.

lewdalewdaover 9 years ago
was quick

I did like the story, except the grudge fuck he gives his Mom, at least she came.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
a fine story

And anything--even a raucous argument--that gets a boy's hard young cock up his own mother's warm wet twat is good news. Now that Michael's blown his young balls up his own mother's cunt, mom's cunt will always be open for business as far as her darling baby boy's concerned. Look, at his age the kid's got to unload his balls like all the time. His semen just keeps building up. And now Michael and his mother know the perfect place for all his semen, where it's safe and protected and loved. Right up inside his mother. Mom'll go around with her darling baby boy's semen in her belly, it'll warm her and keep her smiling as she recalls the hot incestuous fuck that her Michael gave her and that he'll keep on giving her. Up his own mother's cunt is where a boy's sperm belongs.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
try a little tenderness

pull back from the anger

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Damn! Ruined it

Ruined it when you took it anal. Had to stop reading then.

The old fart

homerjayhomerjayover 6 years ago
good one

i loved the premise, anger turning to lust is hot.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 6 years ago
NOT BAD !!!!

Quick and to the point, done steal and you might just get fucked. Way to go mom. Thanks for the quickie

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Hope you knocked her up good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

5 stars short and sweet

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