by aussie_101
I like your style - witty, without being jokey, and at the same time, tender. More please.
...Its a great first date story. Loved reading about Marcus and Susan. Thanks for sharing them with us! Would really love to hear more about them, maybe a chapter2? Will be watching for more! Cheers! --- Josie
Been meaning to read this one for a while but haven't gotten around to it until now. And I'm very glad I did. I loved the story and the characters. If there was one thing to complain about (which isn't REALLY a complaint either, but~) it was that I just wanted to keep reading more and more. It could have been a bit of a slower build-up with the first date there and maybe a bit more in the end of the chapter - but I'm nitpicking and if there's another chapter that'd be a non-issue anyway.
Such a great sensual story. It is also more respectful of trans women than other stories.
I love the phrase "long, velvety waves across my tongue."
Well played, You treated her every bit the lady and seduced her fair and square. By all means do continue, maybe take her out for a night on the town, boyfriend/girlfriend style, so that you can show off this hot babe you just met. :)
So www.literotica.com/s/catching-up-with-susan is the sequel to this one? Why didn't you say so!