All Comments on 'Jess'

Excellently written piece. At first I thought the story was slow in developing, but when I saw where you went with it, I appreciated the pace. Great job.

A love story told of time taken oh so sweet

Of the passion building from when they meet

Of two wanderers both wayward at first

Until their joining begins to quench a thirst!!!

What can I say apart from wow? Lovely story and brilliantly written. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Very well written and a great pace. You remind me of me! :-) Thank you for sharing this beautiful story! I want to read more of your work!

Really enjoyed it. Well written and it kept my attention.

You need to write a book that was the best story I have read in a long time thank you for writing this.

Beautiful, lyrical, thoroughly engaging! A love story, par excellence.

Wonderful n touching ! Gr8

That was a 5* job in my book.

Fabulous isn't quite a big enough word.

Beautiful story, we can all relate on one level or another

Oh God

Its really a very very superb story

Wish I have some of your writing talent so that I could write an equally beautiful feedback / comment ...

I am at loss of proper words to praise you

I enjoyed this story so much that I reread it for the fourth time

If I wear a hat and we meet sometimes ..then I will remove my hat and say

Hats Off!!!

Neo

Through your use of well placed humor and wit, careful construction of your main characters, and we'll paced timing of events, you've created a story that represents what many would consider a perfect experience. It's so well structured that it feels like we're experiencing the joy and happiness right along with the narrator.

I thank you for sharing this amazing story - it gave me a chance to vicariously relive my first time in a much more satisfying manner (my experience was at a young age, both of us over eager, making it a rushed, stressful experience).

Technically speaking, your story is wonderful. I only noticed a few errors and typos - minor issues at worst. I am impressed with the way you gave each personality enough time to exists and become familiar to us, the readers, so that the story, as I mentioned before, is deeper, meaningful, and satisfying. Not too long, not too short, just right.

Thanks again! I hope to read more from you.

I really liked that! Wonderful writing. THANK YOU!

Earlier on, his Analysis Paralysis was overdone. But Jess's sense of humor

and sweetness won me over!

A beautiful story, a romantic story.

Nicely written and,,,,,with good spelling!!!

I give it 10 out of 10.

Great story - both the romance and erotism

The ending made the story. Thks

I loved the your nicely written story just flowed along nicely...gently enough for us to feel that this would have been a lovely first time for all of us.

A.F.C. Somerset.

Isn't it illegal to give such a incredibly great story, an even greater ending?

At the end, this sounds much like me. My wife and I were hardly innocents when we found each other, but for almost 40 years, I’ve been lucky way beyond my deserving to have her in my life. Way out of my league indeed. 5 stars.

Wow, wow,wow. I did not want this story to end. A superb story that could have a chapter two also? Easily a 5 star from me.