All Comments on 'The Power of Touch Ch. 07'

Very good :-) keep it up.

I can't wait to see who is next to get pregnant and what going to happen to other kids and if he make any more slaves too? I can't wait. 2

Jeff is a very dislikable character.

You've made your character too unlikeable.

On top of that, the story is moving too slowly. Each chapter is about him being an asshole, enslaving people, raping women. That gets old very fast. This chapter you started to include something interesting; the resistance by Steve. But instead of moving forward with that we had more rape scenes.

This could be an interesting story if you could get past wallowing in the revenge fantasy.

I am sorry to say your main character is someone that would make the world a better place by dying. I tried to think he might have some redeeming quality, but sadly he does not. I'm not sure why but his destructive effect on what seem to be good relationships annoys me, and makes him seem like a spoiled brat. All I can say is if you were writing him as a villian, you succeeded, but as a hero or even an anti-hero, ... well I can't stomach him in either role.

Don't leave us hanging, continue! A.S.A.P.

very good story can not wait for more the best ever

I love your series but I'd like more of it. Please. Thank you for your writings

I hope you finish and not leave us hanging like a lot of others have

i really like you story so can you write more

As a few others have stated this series needs to be completed like so many more on this site .

What is the task .

how many more slaves will he take

Will he rule the world someday with the powers or rule in the shadows

I am currently back in school for work. I am sorry, but this takes up a lot of my time. I am trying to write. Don't worry, the story isn't finished, there are more chapters to come.

I have no problem with this time table between 7 and The 8th chapter, but please can we get one chapter before we get the worse Clinton in the Oval Office. Please!!!

I am enjoying your fine story. Perhaps it will turn out that you need our hero (?) to be so public about displaying his powers. Personally, I'd have him use names and not "slave" and "master". Those terms bring images of darker times.

Will he keep his powers after the voice is done with him?