All Comments on 'The Return Of The Bully'

Wow, this story has a little bit of every thing you could ask for.

I thought the younger man/older woman sex was real good. But a

younger woman/older woman catfight turn sex fight was just the

best.

Wonderer4 please let there be another part or parts to this story.

And please write more parts to your Jolene's Problem story too.

Maybe a Jolene vs Sarah, milf vs milf catfight turn sex fight some

where down the road. Thanks again.

Durrwood

I really like your story, wonderer4!

I hope you will continue it!

And please, add a few situations. when the mother will have sex in presence of her son. It will make story hotter! Let mom knows her son wathces.

Please give us more chapters like this. This is a masterpiece. One of the best milf bully stories i have ever read after mrs campbells bunkmate. Please add more chapters . Please

Dear readers i'd like to thank you all of you that favourite my story and for your encouraging messages.As i wrote in the beginning of my story there will be a second part only if this one goes well .

Negative comments with no constructive criticism will be deleted .

Thank you all people!

A kickass story , very erotic ! Please write more chapters!

Tom has all sorts of feelings to sort out. From the bully coming back into his life, rich, good looking and seducing his mom to the extent of their sexual liaisons echoing throughout the house, to watching his mom loving all his attention and craving more, to the 'cat fight' turning into a hot lesbian scene. That is a lot for a, what?, 20 year old geek to take in. Freud would have a field day!

You have to write something to address his feelings and how he comes to terms with this. Otherwise, I fear Tom will turn up in the Erotic Horror section of this site. Psycho killer ques que se. Fa fa fa fa fa, fa fa fa fa fa........

I loved it !!! Please Please continue.......

very nice story ; plz continue. but the story should continue to reflect the title. put mike back in the picture; disregard tina

I must agree, please write more parts to this story.

And yes bring back the bully, as he is part of the title.

Maybe Mike returns to make peace between Sarah and

Tina with a threesome.

But again Wonderer4, please add more. Hopefully the

geek gets some action down the road.

Durrwood

There rarely are stories about this theme and point of view, yours was definitely one of my favorites and the twist at the end was something else.

I hope to read more about this story!

5*

You took a seemingly traditional story about a bully and his prey and turned it into one of the most sophisticated, intellectual, exciting, and erotic story imaginable. Everything seemed so real and possible. I FULLY agree that this needs more chapters. With your talent you will keep finding new avenues of adventure and not tread on what is already here.

I would love to see the bully pick on the son some more, incorporating the mother into, perhaps she becomes debased to the point of liking the thought of her own son being picked on.

Personally, I'd find it incredibly hot.

Yes, let the bully pick on the geek.

And

Yes, let the mom start to like it.

It might push the geek to man up

and make a play for Tina.

And then all for can live

horny ever after.

I hope the writer, writes more.

Are there no other men in this town? The mom is an idiot. Her selfish butt should've at least find out why her son disliked Mike. I understand she thought she owed him for saving her but not at the expense of carrying on like a horny teenager where her son can hear and see them screwing. No respect for herself at all. Tom should've left when Mike moved in.

Please, add more chapters!

I agree, they should involve the son in their relationship as a sub and cuckold. Make the mother calls her son "cuckold" during sex and it would be hottest story on lit!

It looks like Tina is another bully too.

Can Tom and Sarah Tame the bullies?

And what does cuckold mean?

Durrwood

only now finding this story here ..... ..... from what i'm reading thus far ->=>->=>

excellent ++ awesome && phenomenal ...... I've gotta now continue with reading

as much as possible even though i'm not able read all now .......... .......... ..........

he literally notices everything __> [ his mother \ his school bully yrs.,,ago ]

doing with each other dinner table butttttttttttttttttt he leaves needing sleep not able

wait with the sleeping ..... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ..... he's just

literally begging his mother have sex his school bully yrs.,,ago ..... HAHAHAHAHA

If Crank- liked part one of this story.

Then part two will blow their mind.

The threesome and the cliffhanger

wow, wow and again wow.

really do wanna continue with reading ..... really do wanna finish with reading .....

really do wanna read all over ..... ..... ..... really do wanna get reading2nd.story -

not been able yet [ grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ]

My neck! WHAT A FRAKIN TWIST!!-!

Awsome !!

I'll keep reading & editing in my head.