All Comments on 'The Pocket Watch Ch.01'

I'd like to encourage you to keep the story going. I'm a fan of buttons 1 and 3.

What kinds of fun I could have with that watch. So many places I could think to use it. I'd end up using just buttons one and three myself. Reminds me of the movie The Girl, the gold watch and everything.

This is the best story I've seen in here. Please write another soon.

Please write ch2 and fast!

This was great. The only thing that would make it better is if the girls were left knowing something happened but not knowing what

A fantasy like this one has limitless possibilities! Please keep going, and explore some of them! I'll be here to read them, if you write them! YOMEYO

Find a copy of John D. McDonald's "The Girl, the Gold Watch, and Everything". In this, one of his few SF stories, an uncle wills his nephew a gold watch with some of the characteristics of this one. The story, along with being one heck of a fun romp around Florida in the '60s, deals with the ethical and moral factors of having so much power.

Don't laugh, the problems would become very real and quite serious if the user was tempted to continue using it as Jack has shown he wants to. That said, "On With the Show"! Let's follow Jack as he self-destructs and takes his entire world with him...

Wonderful story , I could have had a LOT of fun with this watch at school.

I feel we need several more sequels to this story !!

this is very very similar to the book "The Girl The Watch and Everything"

Can't remember the author

The consistency is terrible. You need to watch your tenses, who the story is about (me/he) and you need a proof reader.