All Comments on 'A Surprise in the Bathroom'

Great Job! Anorexia is a serious disease, so when I see comments like the one suggesting a pizza, I take a deep breath and remind myself that the pizza commentor is an ignorant ass and someone to be ignored. Meesh

Thank you for your feedback. This is my first erotic story, not just on this page, and all feedback and thoughts on it are highly appreciated.

I know the theme is very controversial and includes some twisted ethics, and I wish to note that I do not in any case promote anorexia even if some of its elements can be seen as sexually attractive.

I intend to further explore the psychology and interaction of the characters in some other story, which I believe is at least as important as the purely sexual side.

Wow!! Truly sexy. As a man that loves the anorexic look, this story was so vivid. And the line, "My lips are calorie free" made my heart race!! I am so glad that someone has finally written a story that captures the beauty, struggle, and perfectness of an anorexic girl. I hope you continue writing!

Excellent story and love the details in your writing. You should keep writing.