All Comments on 'Brotherly Love'

by Cromagnonman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fabulous

Love it when a corrupt pos gets his cake but cant eat it

Being that daddy told him how to go about corruption,, it is possible daddy had things set up during his reign also

Maybe next chapter could be about Sasha and Robert exposing Daddy as well

No mater what happens ,, do NOT let him lose Sasha and return to the other user BITCH Robyn

Sid0604Sid0604over 9 years ago
Thank you...

Thank you for another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your tale... it's easily worth 5 stars.

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 9 years ago
Great story

Excellent writing again. However, I found it difficult to get a sense of how long each event was taking. I was not sure if it was days, weeks or months.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 9 years ago
Good story

Nice to see the adulterous breather get his comeuppance. But what about the investigation into the money that Robyn stole?

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Good people on bad places -

The good and principled people won and the ashats lost in proportion to their - um ashattedness???" LOL

The brother against brother thing is a classic - of course - but this round went very well for the good guys.

Rob divested himself of a woman who failed to get it so paid - large and a brother who could never have gotten it - so it was given to him heh.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticalmost 7 years ago
Great atory

A great and interesting story. A rather surprising family, where almost all seem to be corrupt except Rob. Good development of history and interesting ending.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

cybojicybojiabout 4 years ago
This is a gem

Welcome back. We missed you. 5

Starwolf1961Starwolf1961about 1 year ago

The pace was absolutely perfect. I was intrigued from the start. I absolutely had to keep reading. The technical business language was somewhat hard to navigate, along with the foreign agencies (I'm an American). Otherwise you can be very proud, an excellently crafted yarn of the finest kind. KUDOS!

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Good story, well paced BUT the ending was incomplete.

What happened to Robyn, did Sasha and hi get married? Did he permentally take over the company, etc.

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