All Comments on 'Together with Troy Ch. 01'

Loved it. Very compelling. Keep writing.

... nice story. Definitely keep going.

Loved your descriptions and how you translated the emotion and caring, as well as the entire essence of the scenes you described.

You write well. Keep up the good work. I anxiously await your next installment.

Please keep writing!!

Great story

It keeps the readers attention. You make it totally believable.

Keep up the good work

Racer24

Wonderful read. You built it nicely. No apologies, this is an art form.

Usually I spot errors in most stories, but perhaps I was reading too fast.

Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Thanks Don

The details and emotions in your story made me wish that I had an Auntie like that 20 yrs ago !

That was incredibly hot!!! Please keep going!

I like it, I'm not going to lie I hope the homosexuality bs is removed completely from the story.

That said I'm with you right now.

I thought it was a good story until;

He snarled. "Damn it, suck me! Suck me bitch. Fucking tease!"

That ruined the mood and all of a sudden we had an asshole male.. Not a nice guy. Stopped reading soon after.

I like the fact that you didn't waste time in the beginning explaining what was what, who was who. Apparently you know that most readers are able to pick it as they go. you also didn't desribe the people overly. Let a reader fill in the blanks.I gave it a five.

Happy to have you here.

and engaging