All Comments on 'First Time Slut'

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JJgreenvilleJJgreenvilleover 9 years ago
This was a good piece, until............................

..................you started cutting and pasting the same thing from earlier in the story. Once I got to the second time around reading the same thing I just quit reading. Very boring!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I Agree!

A very engaging story until the repeat. Overall though... Very hot, thanks for bringing us in. Enjoyed the style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Next Chapter

Hey gotta read the next chapter when you go back for more and give up your ass cherry for that monster cock !!!

playtime2728playtime2728about 9 years agoAuthor
Unwanted Repeat!

From the author - I know my story was copied twice for some reason, starting over on the third page. Trying to fix it but hasn't worked out yet. Just read till the mid 3rd page everyone!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

no illustrations!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Add the pics

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