All Comments on 'Big Top'

I enjoyed the eerie, other worldy aspect to this. Especially loved the transformation of pretentious Dave. Too bad he wouldn't be able to remember his other self.

You have some problems with using the wrong words (where vs wear) that kept getting in the way of the read, but otherwise a good story.

Amazing; very hot and disturbing. Please write more soon.

thank you so much, i loved it.

I enjoyed the story very much. I'd like to have learned a bit more about the changes, a little more background or follow through on what was happening. That's just me being picky. I did very much enjoy your story though. Please keep up the good work and pay no attention to my ramblings.

Still disturbing, but it wasn't too horrifying. Fruit-striped dick, huh? lol

We of the Night demand it!