All Comments on 'Brett's Transformation to Brenda'

This is well written and worth another part (or however many)!

amber could do so many things to/for Brenda.

please don't keep us waiting long

I thought your story was OK, but the poor use of punctuation marks in the dialogue distracted from it. I suggest you use one of Literoticas volunteer editors to help you clean it up next time.

I enjoyed it. .please continue!

I was in his place

Content is great but you are constantly shifting between past tense and present tense. Please just use the pats tense as it is the standard for 99.9% of all stories.