All Comments on 'The Dread Prophecy Ch. 01'

Almost missed it because of the title but recognized your name Brion. Wow 2 pages, LOL but even your 1 page stories cram a lot in them. I love all the details about Ahlissa and its world. Looking forward to more.

Love your stories.

Just a little note: The possessive of "it" never needs an apostrophe ("its", not "it's" or "its'"). It's (it is) an exception to the apostrophe rule that allows "John's" to mean "belonging to John" and "Smiths'" to mean "belonging to more than one Smith".)