All Comments on 'When It Snows Ch. 01'

into it so far. Does seem an abrupt place to end a chapter, but I'll be looking out for the next.

It would seem that H&S is a suspect choice for what I hope transistions into a tale of redemption. However, descriptions of the cat, definately had me chuckling at his misery.

I'll try not to get my expectations too falsely raised, but I WILL thank you for an intriquing start.

Cheers!

was expecting humour..got bleak satire....

Hmmm, no don't think so

Sf, oddly this little piece of biting satire rather appeals to me.

I see from the previous comments, some readers fail to understand just how savage irony can get.

Yeah I know, I'm a punny guy, so sue me!

he has to keep his juevos and say adios to the ex. TK U MLJ LV NV

Even if this is as depressing as crap. Maybe some sunshine soon? The only good thing here is the damn cat.

pathetic cuck shit. wrong category.

Funny and poignant at the same time. Well done!