All Comments on 'The Sleepover'

You should fuck her!

I love how he just made her blow him and then dispatched her. there's an old Hollywood adage of "always leave them wanting more!" I'm sure as that itch between her legs keeps bothering her, she'll wander back to his room before morning.

Lots of potentail in this story - I very much hope that you write lots more :-)

Not incest or taboo...just an friend's dad getting a blowjob.

I can see the daughter coming in the picture in a chapter or two... let's see more

Get his rocks off but does nothing for her? What a Dickhead!

Couldn't find anything.

then I looked for something even slightly erotic,

again, couldn't find anything.

All I found was a very selfish pervert who was her friend's father. A guy who showed absolutely no regard for a girl who was a guest in his house, had her give him a blow job and then just dismissed her, leaving her at a party she wasn't enjoying, for what was certainly to become a very long awkward night.

Put this in erotic couplings or mature. Its not taboo nor incest, quite frankly it was good either.

This isn't incest but it is taboo 100%. Getting your dick sucked by your daughter's friend is definitely frowned upon.

I, like the redhead, got nothing out of this. Basically he raped her. Yeah, maybe twenty years ago he might have slid off in court, but its not a good-oke-boys universe anymore, at least not completely. Used his position of authority to basically force her to do it. It was unpleasant to read.

How can she be 18 but "underage" to the dad...you stole this.

Hopefully, you'll add more, this is a good start but you need to add more, like the next sleepover, and go a step further....make her kneel naked while sucking you