All Comments on 'HYPA - Orgy on the Subway'

The setup was a bit contrived, but the descriptions were great!

It was a short, but fun little story.

Very good, In my head Amelia looked like Nikki Bella so it was a very good orgasem

Yes. Write more.

sometimes when there are many characters to write about the erotic gets lost but pheow, NOT TODAY. or maybe im just extra horny as its the kind of public, exhibitionist with twist story i love! good job

Needs to be much longer..great story..left me wanting for more

great story! Good tease pacing but I would like it to be longer. Thank you!!

Oh fuck!! That was seriously hot! I can't imagine anyone reading this wasn't jacking or jilling. Close to 73K reads here, and I'd bet there is a ton of goo getting wiped up of of hands, bellies, chests, faces and whatever else was in the blast zone. Awesome stroke story! Really hoping you have more of these!! And kudos on writing and proofing. No distractions.