All Comments on 'Fucking Mrs. Ava Ch. 03'

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 9 years ago
Looks like the neighborhood had a new MILF slut.

Looking forward the next chapter.

STARBLACKSTARBLACKover 9 years ago
great

son father and son share mom now? great later son can share mom with friends then Sue and Ava double team the pastor and his wife

boaman007boaman007over 9 years ago
excellent

Loved all 3 parts so far and can't wait for the next one. Great writing. Great story development.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A bit far fetched

I used to be one of those church assholes, but woke up :)

I thought this a bit silly that dad double teamed with his son, but hey, it's fantasy! Overall all, fucking HOT and I love the idea of the church bitch getting fucked!

HisDirtyLittleSlutHisDirtyLittleSlutover 9 years agoAuthor
Part 4

has been submitted and is awaiting approval. Sorry for the time it took to finish it and get it turned in but I hope it is enjoyed. You all are wonderful and I thank you for the votes and emails, you make it enjoyable to write! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
so hot

Im so wet i want the whole family to have their way with me

chytownchytownover 9 years ago
What A Nasty Story****

With some HOT SEX!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
terrible story

Gosh, this story has no imagination, and horrible plot. No realism at all. No working up to sex, and this is simply a horrible story. Don't waste your time or ours!

HisDirtyLittleSlutHisDirtyLittleSlutover 9 years agoAuthor
Ironic...

That someone could be so judgemental of someone's story and yet have to remain anonymous with each critique. I haven't wasted anyone's time since I can't make anyone read my stories. If you weren't such a coward then perhaps your opinions could have been discussed but I digress, you must know it all and be a phenomenal writer yourself. Thanks for the input.

PrivatejinxPrivatejinxabout 9 years ago

First i enjoy your story.

69 on the stairs though? doesnt seem like a realistic endeavor.

And they both left ava tied up unless i just missed the father taking back his tie..

Still likelifelike it either way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
OMFG....

...Iam soooooooooo FUCKN WET !!! MORE, MORE, PLEASE

kisses & licks,

submissive, bi- catt

avengerfiveavengerfiveover 6 years ago
Exquisite!

Love to see a stuck up church slut get what's coming to her.

overkneeoverkneeover 2 years ago

Blindfold mommy and make her guess who she is sucking and who she is fucking, and make her beg to entertain the boys with her pussy licking skills.

blackknight314blackknight314about 1 year ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

No surprise there. All the prim-and-proper, holier-than-thou bitches like Sue are so wound-up and repressed, a fucking strong breeze could trigger an orgasm on them. All they need is a proper good fuck and some orgasms to show them the error of their ways.

I guess the next chapter has father and son fuck the shit out of mom's holes. Cool I'm on board with that. Don't leave Mrs Ava out though. She needs her reward for being so helpful.

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