All Comments on 'Sugar Heart Ch. 03'

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brijeonbrijeonover 9 years ago
Love this story

I love these guys, Buddy is sooo sweet and I feel so badly for Richard but I'm happy he's found Buddy. I want to see their HEA with going back to school, careers, family and home because they should have it. Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

So Cute!!! I love this story. Please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love is so sexy

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bigkahoonabigkahoonaover 9 years ago
Lovely

They are so so cute. I love the story and can't wait for the next episode

PeachyWifePeachyWifeover 9 years ago
ARGG!

Oh man! I'm loving it! I'll be waiting impatiently for more.

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 9 years ago
Wow

With you it's just like tradition, where producing great work is the norm. Now this is an amazing piece.

Headhunter22Headhunter22over 9 years ago
Wow is right!

I really like all you stories but you have out done yourself with this one. LOVE IT!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Oh this is so good. I love the story. It made me cry and laugh at the same time.

It is making my beliefs on love even stronger. Very nicely brought emotions.

When one feels lonely they think of doing crazy things and you have articulated it so wonderfully, and then making one to believe in life, showing its not over..its a great piece of work. They are so cute together. Am desperately waiting for the next chapter.

Keep on going. You rock!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really

a highlight. would you go on, please?

AkshunLoveAkshunLoveover 9 years ago
Awwww!!

Cute and sexy :) i love your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Want More Pleeeeaaase!

Such a wonderful story! :') Your writing is beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sugar sweet, too

The writing of the character's dialogue and the settings is highly skillful, but the emotion written is even better. Perhaps overly optimistic, if love isn't this way, it certainly ought to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I love this story

I loved this story with all my heart , it was utterly amazing . I Can't relate so much and I just have to ask please go on with this story. I love it so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So great!

I adore your stories. You're such a good writer!

filovebugfilovebugover 9 years ago
More, please!

All of your stories are super cute, very enjoyable to read. Please write more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Beautiful

Story so nice, beautifully written and the characters are both super cute and complex! You're so talented, hope you will continue this one :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I think I'm now going to compare every relationship I have to this. Super adorable and please can you write an actual, full length book? We'd all buy it that for certain

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful love story

This series is a wonderful love story, one could easily flesh this out into a first rate popular novel, expanding boyhood stories, issues with unhelpful family structures, awful bigotry masked by false religion, maybe develop some parts to include siblings, and so forth. If Mary Renault could do it, so can you.

HartlesslyHartlesslyover 3 years ago

I absolutely love this. Good enough to be published.

dnsontndnsontnalmost 3 years ago

Can't stop reading...

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