All Comments on 'Anna's Dream'

Top notch writing as usual, Serafina. Perfect fiver!

And that imagination is well converted to the written word

Without good slaves what would we dominant folk do?

I always love reading your work. :)

It's definitely written in the style of a dream. Things not making complete sense, things unsure, hazy. It may have been better if it were written more clearly but obviously that would keep you from being true to the dream, which is often paramount when writing about them.

But I just love your style. The way you write about things, the way you describe people. Not physical descriptions so much as just the way people go about things, their ambiance or state of mind, if you will.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next piece. I hope your real world endeavors are going well.