All Comments on 'The Good Wife: Resubmission Ch. 03'

by jmcroce

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
this is a morbid tale

Good writing though.

absoluterotterabsoluterotterover 9 years ago
It is very good writing.

As the previous reviewer said, it is also morbid. However, I am enjoying your journey to the dark side. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
And you thought this made for a good story?

Not a single erotic, clever or entertaining part to it. Just an ugly tale. Why you think anyone would want to read this is simply beyond me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sad and repulsive

The endless parade holds no power to arouse. Like watching a meth head 'self medicate.'

YourcumkittenYourcumkittenover 9 years ago
nods

i can understand the way she feels,,sometimes one gets so tired of being good, needing to lose control, having limits pushes and tested,,some things are painful

thank You for sharing and taking the time to show a darker side

suzanne

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Is this what you want, Kel?

I think I know someone who says she doesn't want this to happen to her but I wonder if she really does want it... I hope not but I fear she does. So sad, Kel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Compelling

A very twisted tale, and a little hard to fathom the two sides of our fuck-pig's character, but a very compelling story none the less. There was something very admirable in her, that had me continually hoping that she was happy with her degrading choice to be a helpless fuck slave. Her likability, vulnerability, and honesty with herself made the story good. Nicely done by the writer

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