All Comments on 'Breaking Patterns'

This truly made me think about life and how we move through it, the people we touch, how we touch them, how they affect us, the kind of person we strive to be. Are we aware of our selves as we go about our daily life or do we drift along letting the currents carry us without making conscious choices? Do we take responsibility for the power we hold to make an impact on the lives of others with something as simple as a smile or a kind or unkind word thoughtlessly tossed out without intent but with great impact on those we encounter? Imagine how the world would change if we focused even a portion of our energy on doing Good towards others and not leading a thoughtless existence trapped in our own heads...

A beutiful story.

This is one of my abolute favourites, if not THE favourite story I've found on LitErotica. Very beautiful, well written.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story and found it quite moving.

It showed a depth and emotion I hadn't expected when I started reading but it was well worth finishing. I am so glad I did - I read it twice straight through. I look forward to reading more of your work.

It's rare that you get something that has genuine literary merit here on Literotica, but here you go. This is *very* impressive, very creative.

Far better than many stories of this genre printed in anthologies. Expand this a bit and seek a publisher or submit to a magazine! This is quality.