All Comments on 'Yours For Two Hours Ch. 01'

by steve w

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Wow!

good job! i loved it...good details. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Loved it

Yer an artist man, loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Had me wet

amazing.. plz continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
loved this one

this is rockin' keep it comin'

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent!

more! More!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yeah ... I would say you are on the right track...

The right track indeed...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
wonderful

absoulutely wonderful wish i could find me a man to abuse me like that! dont stop!!!!!!!!

needingamasterneedingamasteralmost 18 years ago
holy shit

i came so fucking hard....wonderful wonderful... i need a man like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The Raw really really works

The Raw makes it! At last...a story similiar to my own private ones.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fucking hot

If only I could find a guy like that.....wow. A+

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Mmmmmm

Like the other ladies said, where can I find myself a man like that? Yummy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Hot

Nice. Where can I find a girl to treat my ass like that??

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I SHOWED THIS TO MY MASTER

HE PRETTY MUCH DID THE SAME THING TO ME...I FUCKIN LOVED IT! MMMMMM CAME SOOO MUCH! GRET STORY, WOULD LEAVE TO SEE MORE CUM (I MEAN COME) FROM YOU!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Mmmmmmmmmm

I need a hot teen gape-slut like that!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
fucking shit

that is fucking hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
perfect!

anonymous is right, fucking hot!

xsmurfx3xxsmurfx3xabout 14 years ago
2/5

i may be the only one but i didnt like it much, too much cussing and too many question marks..i mean i readhalf but didn't even get wet or anything

sexscorpionsexscorpionabout 14 years ago
nice one

well im ready as hell for part 2, i like the short sentences, no long drawn out descriptions, good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
shit

its all shit.hopeu cn b better

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
ok..

it was good and hot. don't cuss so much, use a more intelligent vocabulary

mze100mze100almost 14 years ago
good work

Amazing humiliation - well played out. The submissive whore in her came to the fore. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
LOVE IT

Love it, this is exactly what i have been looking for. please write more like this!. got me so hot..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fan-F*cking-Tastic

Love, love, love this story. It doesn't leave much room for future "chapters", but then it doesn't need to. The intensity is awesome and well...it's written pretty damn well. Thanks so much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Really good. Just not a fan of the word 'shitter'. Sorry! Story turned me on - that word turned me off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wet,wet,wet

had to use a fuckinh dildo bigger than the one you were talking about to fulfill my needs after this story my pussy is so sore and wet and I'm still megga horny I wish someone would fuck me like that ;) x

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

so hot! but i agree with a previous comment. shitter, shithole, etc.? all major turnoffs. stick to ass.

RedHawkeRedHawkeover 13 years ago
Okay with Shitter

Like it fine, sounds dirty :) Good work as always!

GemTomaGemTomaover 13 years ago
wowza

hot, fast, brutal.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Don't say shitter. Or talk about shit.

Otherwise, awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

OMFG that was amazing! I came twice! My first orgasm from a BDSM story xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Words

Shithole, shitter was nasty and a turnon

fuck_u_til_u_bleedfuck_u_til_u_bleedover 13 years ago
Amazing!!!

Wonderful story! It's _incredibly_ hot *drools*! Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

The best story i have ever read...and I thought my husband and i were the only ones who did this kind of shit ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
sicko

what planet r u on?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

Holy shit that's amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hard stuff

Yr idea was amazing. You are really on the right lines making this such hardcore stuff, much tougher than all the other stories I have read.

I think it was have been fantastic if you had introduced a dildo for a vaginal fuck that was so enormous it would only go in when she orgasmed, and after when she shrank again, it was so huge it was splitting her.

Another idea, he could have dried her by covering a dildo with a towel and mopping up all her juices so it really hurt to go in!

I thought he could also have put a clit ring in or something, rather than pulling her hair which seemed a bit unsexy to me!

I love your writing, keep on doing it! Thanks, really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wowza

Personally I'm not really into things quite this hardcore, but you still made it sexy. You keep it hot and sexual while still being a good writer--great job & keep it coming! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing

A story I could get into! It's so nice having a young female in the sub role, not some 30-year-old lady. I would love to be treated like this <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Fucking great ass rape

I remember the very first few times I was ass raped ... it hurt so but I loved it at the same time. Nothing better than a fist in one's ass at the end of a long day. Writhing, groaning, crying and never wanting it to stop. GREAT STORY!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Ass Raped

You caught the exact feelings I had when I was first ass-raped. I was 16 at the time and I'm 20 years older now but it's still my favorite way to be fucked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good tail story, er, tale!

love submissive painslut stories, and this one is pretty good. MORE, please!

Property_of_Lord_RhiakathProperty_of_Lord_Rhiakathabout 13 years ago
awesome

I love it so far! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
my favorite

this is definitely one of my favorite stories, i read it over and over! keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
love so much!

i honestly am in love with this story. i found it months ago and i keep coming back to read it. i submit like that, always.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
oh yes

I love it keep going with it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
definitely yes

well written, imaginative. add more of "help, what is he about to do now?" so she starts to fear what he will do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Damn

Kik me if you wanna stretch my cunt and virgin ass. I'm so wet. nickolexoxolol

RedHawkeRedHawkeabout 10 years ago
What should he do?

Tie her ass up and call some friends over :)

PuppyLov3rPuppyLov3ralmost 10 years ago
approved

The story was pussy dripping good, but the writing itself could have used an editor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Younger Brother/boyfriend should be thankful

that older brother and soon-to-be-ex girlfriend found each other. No loss for him there. Fine for folks who want all the nastiness they can get, but just messes up people who don't need that if they try to make a go of it with that type. Every level of whatever needs to finds its own kind. Me - my eyeballs need bleach.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good

I liked it but the intro is bad, if you want to get people into reading this fix the intro, make them read this, tell something unusual and fucking sexy. Anyway I rate it 4 Good luck

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
o.k.

You're intro was really bad. The rest was ok though the shift licking was really gross.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The hottest thing I have ever read

i adore your style of writing. I believe your intro was very strong honestly, it sets everything up perfectly. It was a bit gross but that's the point, yes? That was 10/10 thank you, I look forward to reading the second part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good

This is actually quite good, but the focus on liking her own shit was gross, and the idea of a gaping asshole was also disturbing - but I guess that's the point of the BDSM

DaddysGoldenGirlDaddysGoldenGirlabout 8 years ago
Great start

I can honestly say I liked it. I'm into "forced" sex and anal play, so it's right up my street.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Its a good story but i think its in the wrong category to be honest. It needs more orders and bondage and sub dom control to be bdsm where as this touches it a little but is more about anal x

Grandma70Grandma70over 1 year ago

The whole loving pain and forced fisting was hot. I can see a lot of ways to continue the story from there. The sh*t licking turned me off.

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