All Comments on '*POP*'

good good good

Damn, shoulda waited a few moments to calm down before voting - only gave you 4 stars by accident. Sorry.

I like this story, and even though knowing very little about the protagonist, I've kinda fallen for her & want to know more of her story & this relationship. She's maddeningly likable yet I can't figure out why. This story grabbed me viscerally & emotionally. It was quick, short, sneaked up on me, grabbed me. Really well done! Write another chapter.

XOXO

Erin

Really appreciate the comments. Am open to receiving constructive criticism for sure.

MORE!

I want toread more bo your possessing of the lady you're playing with.