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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/21/04

Awesome

This is by far the most awesome erotic story I have ever read!!!

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by Anonymous03/12/04

Most awesome...

...well this comment can be made on ALL of the stories of this author. It's nearly unbelieveble how he is always fascinating in his writing.

The sex is tremendous but much more important it's not ONLY sex but a real developping of characters and always telling a complete story.

Really great!

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by Anonymous04/08/04

wow!

This had me so hot and bothered i attacked my boyfriend... i think he'd thank you if he knew what i was doing while he was studying!! thanks so much!

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by Erotica_Writings05/30/04

Very good

mmmmm very hot

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by youngstiffdick06/12/04

Another masterpiece

Simply another masterpiece from this author! This story was written so well that it literally drew me into the circle of friends he describes.
The sex was very hot and the development of the characters was awesome!!
I read part of this story one day and couldn't wait to get back to it and finish it today....just like a great novel!
Thanks for the story!!

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by TheDR4KE07/07/04

inspiring story

Thanks for this excellent story. Not only was the erotica great, but I also found it very inspiring: we face ourselves in situations where we are drawn to fantasies, but fantasy allows us to not face the problems we're in. Reality is much more fulfilling, but an affair to sate our hunger for the real also isn't enough without some support.

We're human, and you've captured that wonderfully. Thanks.

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by snehal_shah4u07/17/04

MORE please.. but ROMANTIC

How much to praise u? now, i dont have new words to praise u for ur stories because all of them are used i guess. let me use single a word again. U r the BEST writer.

Where should this story head? Please let the richard and mary get together. it should be more romantic. Describe in FULL detail the long talk they r goin to have together. next part should contain more of richard and mary then dana and drew. Let this couple (richard-mary)be alone.. and explore everything.. so.. slow.. so.. romantically. DO IT. u r the best.

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by puffpuff08/20/04

Lucky Drew & Dana

A great story, if only i was Drew, lucky bugga.

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by LESCO4708/21/04

THE GREASTEST

GREAT STORY,IHAVE READ MANY BUT THIS WAS THE BEST EVER.

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by Anonymous08/26/04

One of the two or three best ever read

Congratulations! great story--extremely erotic blend of lesbian, vaginal and anal sex among people who really care for each other. no brutality, cuckold husbands ,slut wives or many of the other depressing characteristics you frequently find on Literotica -keep up the great writing. Ct. Yankee

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by Anonymous11/26/04

One of the few stories I read over and over again!

A long time lurker, this is the first feedback I have ever left. This story is simply SMOKIN! An excellent blend of eroticisms, without getting too weird.

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by nebulosity866911/26/04

Wife is gonna get it now...

As always, an excellent tale. Exciting buildup, and a great finish. Time to go find my wife and give her a big surprise

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by Anonymous11/28/04

oh my god i can barely type

that was so good oh..my...god...

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by aperfectidiot12/23/04

good job tiger

wow...that is impressive...i like the length and the build up to the...bleem...climax...cheesy line i know.
i try to write with similar activities in mind...you do it well.

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by noel.d12/29/04

Aaaahhhhh!!

Fantastic story. I would happily change places with ANY of your characters.

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by joyride5901/17/05

us

The build up was masterful, as in real life, the sensitity was enough to allow a person the time to recognize the power that 50,000,000 years of evolution supercedes our intellectual understanding of our supposed sophistication and lets us know that our sensual appreciation of our true animal selves have nothing to do with intellect. Our need for sexuaul satisfaction is a combination of non-judgemental appreciation of what unites us as felllow earthlings and trust in our sexual partners that we will keep our intimate sexual expressions confidential in the face of anything goes. There is an aspect of sexuality that requires intimacy and circumspection, of course uninhibited sexuaul expression is a goal we would all aspire to, the reality even today, requires a sensitivity necessary to allow a person to truely express an open legged uninhibited mind set to really understand their true sexual nature. The over view is we all need sexual satisfaction and with some sensitivity we can help each other achieve true sexual satisfaction Dave

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hindsight IS 20/20!

Hot! Left me hot and hard like molten iron, lmao. This story brings to mind personal experiences for me, and possibly articulates fantasies for others. Excellent work and I'm gonna be pissed if there isn't more from rgjohn. thank you

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by HughJard02/12/05

wonderful...

what a wonderful job of patient storytelling. thank you.

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by Anonymous02/27/05

My oh My oh MY...........

My oh My oh My....what a wonderful story...best i've read in ages... Keep UP the good work. :)

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by jacqui4u203/19/05

Excellent Story

One of the true gems on this site. It rewards those of us who love this site and muck through the stories. I am adding you to my favorites list right now.

This is one of my favorites stories on this site.

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by thebullet04/02/05

Boring? Stupid? What story were you reading?

Hindsight is one of the very best stories on Literotica, and I don't even like anal stories. For anyone to claim the story is 'boring and stupid' means that they did not read the story. This poster is obviously the type who reads the opening few paragraphs, reads the ending, realizes that the wife is cheating and torpedos the story.

I've had this story on my favorites list from the beginning. rgjohn is among the best writers on Literotica and Hindsight is one of his best stories.

Mostly it's one damn sexy story.

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by John Thompson04/25/05

An Inspired Story

No need for too much "gushing" here - I'll just say it's obvious why this story is one of the top stories on the site. Well done.

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by teresawrites2u05/07/05

20-20

Thank you for inspiring me, I was wet for days….

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by MooncatX05/13/05

Thank you!

Gorgeous. Had me squirming in the happiest way. *^_~*

MooncatX

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by Anonymous05/18/05

The best

What has been said only 10 fold

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by Anonymous05/30/05

A Talented Writer

I am on med.s that make it nearly impossibe to have an orgasm.
Thank-you for taking the time to write a story that builds, (like a good orgasm) until I finally climaxed in my jeans with only the seam of the crotch to stimulate me.
Your writing was a gift.

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by Tarros06/10/05

Best story on the site!

This was one of the most tittilating and erotic stories I've read on this, or any other site. The plot, character development and sheer sexuality of it was magnificent. Keep writing and posting, and we'll all keep reading and enjoying!!!!

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by Anonymous06/21/05

OH WOW

I just finished the story hindsight and i am in complete amazement. This story was so breath taking. What a very talented writter. I will be reading all of rgjohns storys. Awesome work.

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by Minigales06/21/05

Good but not Perfect

I know I will not make a difference in the sea of cheers.
It is a very well written story, but the plot warranted the following comment.

So Dana had an affair five years ago. Although her husband was very understanding, she is still guilty about it. To help make it up to him she betrays her friend into an affair even worse since she knows how straight-laced Richard is. Her excuse is that he is clueless--apparently the same excuse she used with her own husband when she had her own affair for several months (not a long time given that affairs should last for centuries). She knew fully well that if Richard finds out, her friend's marriage is over and her kids are screwed. I have to say, what a friend! With this kind of friend, ...

Another comment is about your writing realism. It sounds like you learned about anal from old porn movies. It takes a lot more than a little spit on a cock to prepare for anal sex, especially if the cock was allegedly large.

Apart from that, the story was very erotic and well written.

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by Anonymous07/10/05

wow....

That was an unbelievably good story. I dont normally read anal stories, but Im glad I clicked on it and read it.

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by Anonymous07/12/05

Tham it was good!

Tham this story was good I had a hard-on through the hole story!!!

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by lentish_bob07/13/05

wow

normally not into arse fucking stories but this one once i started I couldn't stop reading. One of the best I have ever read. I had such a hard on all the time I had to sit still behind my desk afterwards.

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by warbuxxx07/21/05

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

A little long but probably one of the best anal stories i have ever read. Iwould love a part two to see if Richard gets his shit together. If not oh well this author is very talented i came twice while reading

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by Anonymous08/01/05

yes wow

That was a trully inspirational piece of work I have never in my life read something that was so long i was interested the whole time ..

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by bigrimmstales08/30/05

cum on the arse and all

i loved this story. It made me wish I'd been able to get my first wife to be like the frustrated housewife instead of it being me who went next door to my best friend and his wife.it did feel a long story but then a short one would have been too predictable probably. well done for a great hard-on inducer!

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by DKaye11/10/05

Hot Realism

Wonderful story--utterly realistic, which made it even hotter. I felt like I knew these people and never once felt like they weren't behaving in character.

I almost didn't read this because it was so long. I lost any impatience somwhere in the middle of the first page.

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by twill01/14/06

Mostly loved it.

For my reality oral/anal contact isn't sexy. I loved this description of anal sex, except that I thought it lacked credibility in using saliva for lubricant. I would love to read about male lovers really loading her butt; her receining several loads in succession so that her anus gets full as like a come enema.

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by Imagination7502/03/06

I could visualise everything from the descriptions

There are not too many writers around who can produce a story as well-rounded as this. The sex was carefully described, as were motivations locations and circumstances. From the descriptive angle I could conjure visions of everything in the story which helped enormously with understanding sexual acts and behaviour of which I have no personal experience. An idea now would be to have a Hindsight 2 - Richard's Story, in which a Richard mystified by the changes in his wife embarks on a similar set of experiences.

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by CetanAhbleza02/15/06

Dayyyyyyyyyyum, son!

Well, let me settle down a bit! chuckling, here....
Great theme, awesome character build, same with the plot/story line. I normally don't read such long stories, but yours was magnetic. I actually had errands for work to run, and stopped around page 5, just to return to it 3 hours later. I must say that I had a raging erection almost the entire story! And that, alone, is about the best compliment I can give you.(and no, girls, sorry, I didna touch m'self at all!)
How many 'atta-boys' you want here? Laughing....

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by chun_gong03/08/06

You rocked my world!

WOW! I hardly know where to begin. This has lasted me for days because it was more than I could take in one sitting. The memories that it brought back were astoundingly realistic, brought to life through your incredible talent for writing. Your sexy skills engulfed me and kept me lost in a daze, wanting more. Incredible, absolutely incredible. Thank you for sharing this excellent adventure.

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by Anonymous03/15/06

Autobiographical?

Very well written. Held this reader enthralled. Now, tell us how the three of them free Richard. It has been three years, and surely you have worked on him by now. Help, and m
aybe you will solve our problem!

I can't log in. He reads, also.

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by Anonymous05/05/06

Quality Writing equals quality enjoyment

Having read many erotic stories in my 54 years, I have been used to 'same old, same old'...not this time, great writing, suspense and excitement throughout the story.

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by romeuoldman06/10/06

Excellent

Somebody says that when woman cheat the main cause is men´s guilty. The story proofs the adage. A lesson. A splendid life's´s lesson.

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by bigrimmstales07/16/06

sensual salivating saphic sex and a man too!

Absolutely blown away by this story. I have been the partner anally fucking the neighbour and it retained good memories..Well done.

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by Anonymous07/23/06

loved it

I read erotica once ina while and dont usually concentrate on long sotries because tehy are slow.
But this one was a steady great read.

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by SEXCAPE09/23/06

wonderful story

well , I normally don't read such long stories , but this one was a real exception.

Loved it !!
kepp more chapters coming,, how does this go ahead ,, does Richard get into this ??
keep more coming please

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by crashD11/27/06

great stuff!!!

loved the scene with the friend watchign the two of them - hotttttt!!!

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by grizbearmt12/07/06

Well Written Erotica

A quite well written story even though it was a jerk-off styled sex story and a fantasy.

What I enjoyed considerable was the lead-up to the actual sex. I see that you spent considerable time thinking about the feminine side of your characters. There seemed to be reasoning to their thoughts and actions. There was an actual and acceptable why to the whole affair. The two were not shadow figures, but seriously had character. I definitely had the feeling that their actions and motivation was as women would do and have.

Very nice piece of writing, thank you for sharing.

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by Anonymous02/25/07

Long Horny Story

i love this long anal story....rotipao@gmail.com

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by Anonymous04/29/07

'asstoundingly' sexy hot story

Awesome, without doubt the best erotic story ever written. Cant wait to see how that councelling goes.

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