All Comments on 'Tasting Sarah'

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impo_60impo_60over 9 years ago
His penalty...

His penalty for cheating had turned in life penalty, because after all he had loved to be punished...What she never said was: "I love you and only you", but instead she choose to say: "I'm with you, only because I chose to be..."

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 9 years ago
Forget the other comments

It is well written and hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Confusing at first

with the two women's names but clarified further in the story. Tonguing a freshly fucked pussy - you made me hard! Would love to do that! However, if I were the husband, it would not be just the wife getting extramarital sex. I would have some too. An open marriage - threesomes - both FFM and MMF - eventually maybe even orgies! Well written - five star effort.

patilliepatillieover 9 years ago
Not into the cucky thing, but man this was hot

Nice job, well told and kept the suspense going pretty consistently.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lengthy story.

It was a lengthy read but filled with details and a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what he is really saying is he is bi

Good for you, I'm not, better for me

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it!

I love creampies. Loved this story.

indysubmaleindysubmaleover 9 years ago
A Masterpiece

Far from a typical cuck-slutwife stroke story. This was well written, suspenseful and extremely erotic.

I really hope that the author ignores the trolls and continues to share more stories with similar themes.

kyron99kyron99about 9 years ago
Closet cucks abound

Great story. Always amused by the angry closet chucks who come here to read jerk off material then get mad at themselves for it. nuts...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Stupid people, but we shouldn't blame the author.

It's a plausible plot, just not that well executed. For that we can blame the author. If hubby really likes eating another man's cum out of his wife, and wife likes getting that cum placed there, then why don't they do this more often? And she is wasting her time punishing her husband for fucking Lauren. He's fucking every college student he can get in his office. Why not? What's wife going to do, make him eat more guy's cum out of her pussy, which he loves doing? It all just gets stupid and silly and unbelievable. Fine if it works for them, but its makes for an implausible dumb story.

Is it hateful to have a negative opinion? Or just to express it? What do we call people who avoid what they don't want to hear, see, or know?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
From a technical standpoint - fairly well written

But for a fun or entertaining story? This was a failure. I notice that the majority of your stories end up with 3's. That should tell you something about your stories. Most aren't well received. You can write fairly well. But your story lines are poorly thought out and usually end badly. Might want to consider a change of course.

SamuelDexterSamuelDexterover 2 years ago

Good story.

A little weak on the ending. Not sure it could ha e been different. I enjoy your writing. Not the ordinary

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved this story for the story itself and the descriptive writing style of the physical and emotional. Freshly fucked creampies are certainly polarizing, especially with foreign sperm, but what makes this work is Sarah’s confidence, sex appeal and love for having her pussy worshipped. Not interested in embarrassing her husband but surprised that it (she) still excited him. I thought the ending was very real. People have their little kinks

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