All Comments on 'Winter Magic of Nature Photograph'

Redo this, check for spelling errors. Have someone proof read it to. It's a rough draft to say nicely.

... a lot of work! I stopped reading after about 5 paragraphs. See previous comment.

It is irritating and makes is hard to understand the story line.

You really need to work on sentence structure. And you jump to much between scenes with out any lead in. Remember, we, you readers, cannot read what you have in your head. Keep your readers in the loop of your thinking. But don't over do the scene descriptions. Plus spell check, spell check, spell check.

I think this was a good read, even if all the grammar police say it wasn't. Waiting anxiously for pt 2