All Comments on 'A Long Time Coming Ch. 08'

There's an epilogue, right?

But I second that...epilogue coming, right?

Epilogue?

We need more chapters!

This was too good. I did feel bad for Jackson in the end. I hate he realized he had a good thing so late, now it's too late with Jade (but hopefully not Briana).

Epilogue Missy, but get better first.

Thank you for this wonderful story!!!!

I am so glad you did not keep the readers waiting until next year or years later to bring this story to this point😃

Would love an epilogue to this story about Alex and Jade's additional babies to their family.

This story was believable, romantic, and just HOT!! Glad no one was kidnapped, assaulted, etc. I hope you do a story on Alex's friend, Brad Simpson...also I second an epilogue on these two.

This is a good story that could be great if you bothered to edit. So many letters missing off of words, lots of punctuation missing also. Take some pride in your writing and edit.

Thank you for a wonderful LOVE story. The sex scenes were great (after all this is an erotic site) but I really appreciate the way you allowed all of the characters to come to mature adulthood. I really appreciate that some complex situations were handled without anybody being verbally or physically abusive. The situation between Jade and Adele could have been bitter. But you allowed a 25 year old to be a mature woman who could see the negative impact of such behavior. She loved her daughter enough not to force her into a situation of having to choose sides and having the benefit of both her natural grandparents. You allowed Jade to have the maturity to defuse an angry ex-girlfriend and security in Alex's love that she didn't need to "mark her territory". You allowed Francine and Jackson to recognize their loses didn't have to control their lives forever. And THANK YOU for redeeming a black man in the life of his child. I cried real tears seeing in print the hope that a man can choose to man up, can admit he wasn't there and can work to get there. Thank you for letting him get past having to compete with another man (especially a white one) for a woman he let get by him. Thank you for Alex respecting Jackson's efforts and having the grace to trust Jade's love for him to step aside for jade have a private conversation with her ex (who is also her baby's daddy). Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. Great writing

5*****s

Love the new chapter n wonderful story..

Totally enjoyed this. Great character and plot resolutions fully respectful of the characters you had created for us. Loved it!! Epilogue please!!

let's have some insight from the honeymoon and episodes of life after marriage. I guess we are not ready for this couple to go.

Epilogue PLEASE!!!!!!!

Totally loved this story!! Both of your stories have been amazing and make you feel good. You realize that there are amazing possibilities! Thank you!!

Jade, Alex and Brianna are so cute. Am I the only one who wanted Jackson to sign over his parental rights so Alex could adopt Bri? Jackson makes my left eye twitch!!

I am soooo happy your back and with a vengeance! This is bittersweet, I love the ending with them getting married and having the happy life, Jade and Alex both deserve. But I want more and now it's over *cries*..

I hope you continue writing great stories, your work is addictive. Great job, please make more soon.

Ps. Epilogue for Alex & Jade? Pleaseeeee? LOL :D

When Briana called Alex "Daddy" I almost passed out from joy! The moment when you knew Jade and Alex would truly be alright. This story came together perfectly and I am so glad that everyone grew through its duration. Please give us at least 2 more chapters lol.

I just love this story. As others have asked, could you please insert an epilogue with some babies?

Wonderful story; 2nd best after Ryan's story. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

Great read. Was not disappointed except it ended too soon. Maybe a story about bro Cameron who is not sure about marrying his current girlfriend b/c he is looking for something in different flavor. Just a thought. ...

Your writing is so amazing, could you please write another story!

Loved this story! Jade and Alex were perfect for each other.

When a man means to love a woman, he will make the right choice for himself and nothing or anyone else will get in the way. Thank you. This story shows love, respect ad adoration, family and friends and the support and love they bring into your life.

Thank you

Nice! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐