All Comments on 'A Present'

by MisterSinnister

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Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgover 9 years ago
Josie Like...

...But dunno if I can wait 6 months for another one :) You write beautifully, and certainly erotically. Nice snapshot story that's for sure, but just dying to know more about the characters. Still... it's your story, and you nailed it as a scene piece and no complaints from here, you simply leave us wanting more. Cheers! --- Josie

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
LOVE TO-BE KIETH

Would be fun to-be the middle man, and do CLEANUP on all YUM,YUM

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lucky Keith

Damn, what a lucky guy. I'd love to have a wife like her. Well written, and very stimulating story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The only thing

The only thing that bothered me was how he managed to suck the remaining cum out of Chrissy while doing her. He did say she wasn't huge, which made the story all the better, but Kieth is one flexible guy.

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